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专业机构【英文代写】:如何写出一篇超神的Personal Essay?

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Dueduedue每次帮助学生或者客户edit升大学的personal essay或奖学金申请书,都一定要和大家分享一下,如何可以开始edit?因为Dueduedue希望要了解兴趣同passion、有什么理由非要申请这个学位不可呢?这样才有可能写出超神的申请信。为什么要超神?Admission officer每天都要读几十封信,如果写的一般,怎么会有interview的机会呢?那到底该怎么写呢?请往下看:

1. Throw away the templates.

网上可以找到很多申请信的样板,但是,Your essay should be unique, and uniquely you. 文字是否出于真心,读者都看得出。

2. Show, don't just tell.

是人都能读懂的廉价形容词,可以省省了。什么creative thinker、great attention to detail、logically-minded这些好像对住admission requirements照抄的词,谁不懂写?写了,哪会有用?不是说这些qualities都没有用,只是你要找方法说服你的reader,你的确拥有这些qualities。要stories and concrete examples, colourful examples that can help your reader depict what kind of person you are。人人都懂得吹的废话,请尽量减少。

3. Don't be afraid to market yourself.

很多人其实并不了解自己。举个例,有个学生想申请奖学金到外国修读mass communication的硕士课程。他在某大电台任职,负责节目制作,多年制作过不少很受欢迎而独一无二的节目。写申请信时一定要多花力气介绍电台(国内的电视,外国人未必知道)及谈谈他最流行的节目,例如获得的奖项、节目受欢迎程度,以及其他特别之处。这跟所报科目有关,也能表现能力,应该多讲多sell。

4. Show your unique insight into the field.

写你对学科或行业的独特见解,或特别能力。见解很重要,因为能表现你对学科的认识、兴趣、insight和passion。举个例,如果Dueduedue要报道Master's in Linguistics或Teaching English as a Second Language,不能只写I'm very passionate about English teaching。我会讲我有什么在英文教学界「人无我有」的经验,或对科目有什么insight。例如我会先讲自己工作独特之处:

I consider myself a specialist in the English teaching industry — I help business executives and professionals improve their spoken English. I work with them on all aspects of their oral English, from pronunciation to speech delivery. Instead of limiting myself to the teaching of articulation, I focus a lot on improving the prosodic features of my clients' English speech, namely, speech rhythm and intonation — areas that many English teachers find difficult, if not impossible, to teach.

然后再elaborate:为什么rhythm and intonation对大家来说特别难学,自己有什么特别的教法等等,显出对自己科目的见解。当然,最后还要扣题,讲清楚why studying linguistics at the postgraduate level will help me achieve my goals (doing further research into pronunciation teaching and devising new ways of teaching).

如果你发现还是很难写出来?你可以准备好自己的材料联系我们,或许Dueduedue能够帮到你。

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