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Essay高分代写(附带:范文参考)

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要这里谈的英文作文主要的英文以美。意大利语为主英文作文(随笔)分成四种文体:说明文(说明文体),论说文(议论文),抒情文(描述随笔),记叙文(叙事随笔)。比较常考的是Expository Essay及Argumentative Essay,这里就分享这两种文体的写作方法。

说实话是用事实来说明或解释某个主题;论述Ettay则是要对某个议题采取赞成或反对的立场,你必须选择一个坚定的立场去论述你的想法和观点,以说服读者。只要文章架构正确,对自己陈述的论点言之有物,再注意文法及用字,基本上就已掌握了成功关键。

书写以前

1.为自己想好的标题命名,写在纸张的正中央上方,简短贴切为原则。

2.脑力激荡:看到文章标题或主题,你的脑袋瓜会出现什么?花一分钟的时间思考,想到什么就把关键字或关键片语写在空白纸上,时间一到就停止想,开始组织你写下来的思考重点。

3.开始打草稿

4.正式书写

文章架构

1.一段每开头和结尾都要先空两格,才开始写字,之间解析:要有空一行的间距

2. 第一段(引言段)直接清楚地介绍你要在这篇文章谈论的话题及纲要。开始的第一句话要写主题句点出标题目的,而最后一句话要写的论文声明陈述接下来要谈的重点。

3. 第 2〜4 段为证据正文段落,提供证据或有力的事实来支持你的论文陈述。

(1)第二段 (身体第一个)详述第一个事实,不要离题。

(2)第三段 (Body Paragraph Two)详述第二个事实。

(3)第四段(正文第三段)详述第三个事实。

4. 最后一段为结论(Conclusion):除了总结整篇文章,也可以补充一些资讯让读者有更多省思,你可以把文章结束的很漂亮,表现出「以上我所说的一切头头是道」的那种概念。

连贯流畅

除了架构正确,还要留意段落之间或上下句之间是否有连贯,合逻辑,连接的是否流畅,使用适当的连接词,转折语,副词等就能增加连贯与流畅的功能,以下面一段为例,斜体字的部分就是扮演该段连贯流畅功能的词汇:

Why I Don't Make My Bed

Ever since I moved into my own apartment last fall, I have gotten out of the habit of making my bed--except on Fridays, of course, when I change the sheets. Although some people may think that I am a slob, I have some sound reasons for breaking the bed-making habit. In the first place, I am not concerned about maintaining a tidy bedroom because no one except me ever ventures in there. If there is ever a fire inspection or a surprise date, I suppose I can dash in there to fluff up the pillow and slap on a spread. Otherwise, I am not bothered. In addition, I find nothing uncomfortable about crawling into a rumpled mass of sheets and blankets. On the contrary, I enjoy poking out a cozy space for myself before drifting off to sleep. Also, I think that a tightly made bed is downright uncomfortable: entering one makes me feel like a loaf of bread being wrapped and sealed. Finally, and most importantly, I think bed-making is an awful way to waste time in the morning. I would rather spend those precious minutes checking my email or feeding the cat than tucking in corners or snapping the spread.

用字选择

千万别卖弄文字,使用艰深难懂或不普遍的文字,有些学生以为多写些艰深的英文字可以证明自己高超的英文字汇程度,而得高分,那就大错特错了。说明文主要的目标是要将内容解释清楚,论说文则要呈现你的论点言之有物,令人信服,让读者看懂才是最重要的,所以必须把握许多用字原则:

1.简单易懂,读者一目了然。

2.美语人士习惯用的字汇:这个就要靠平常大量阅读专业美语人士写的报章杂志,教科书,文章...等,才能体会,需要长时间经验累积,自然能知道用哪些字较妥当,这个真的就不是一下子能学的来的东西了。

3.尽量不要重复使用相同的字

4.使用字汇的深度或习惯要尽量一致。

道地美语

学会用美语思考,才能写出道地美语的口气,有些人写的文章,看起来就是洋泾滨英语,是先用中文思考再直翻成英文的写法,常出现台式英语的状况。常常看一篇文章,很容易可以看出来是否美语人士写的,这是一种美语文化及环境历练的结果,很难用三言两语来形容,除了大量阅读美语人士的文章(较有文学,语言教学,或教育背景的美语人士)来体会,最好向接触美国环境较久的中籍老师或有英语教学背景的美籍教师学习美语写作,这是很严谨的话题,写作老师必须本科系毕,不是美籍人士就可以教导作文,一般美国人的文法是很差的,除非是英文系或英语教学系毕业。

修改

最好在考试结束前10分钟就书写完毕,利用10分钟反覆阅读,并修改错误,最后大功告成。

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Paragraph 1: The IntroductionTopic Sentence (Main Idea for your paper)Example Sentence #1 (Subtopic)Example Sentence #2 (Subtopic)Example Sentence #3 (Subtopic)Concluding Sentence that repeats the Main Idea


Paragraph 2: Example #1Topic Sentence Example #1 (from the Introduction)3 Examples sentences that prove your Topic SentenceConcluding Sentence that repeats Example #1



Paragraph 3: Example Paragraph #2Topic Sentence Example # 2 (from the Introduction)3 Examples that prove your Topic SentenceConcluding Sentence that repeats Example #2


Paragraph 4: Example Paragraph #3Topic Sentence Example #3 (from the Introduction)3 Examples that prove your Topic SentenceConcluding Sentence that repeats Example #3

Paragraph 5: ConclusionTopic Sentence (Main Idea for your paper)Example Sentence #1 (Subtopic)Example Sentence #2 (Subtopic)Example Sentence #3 (Subtopic)Concluding Sentence that repeats the Main Idea
My Dog, Romeo 
My dog, Romeo, is the best pet anyone could have. He is beautiful and easy to care for.Playing with him is lots of fun. He always takes care of me. There isn't a better pet anywhere.
  Romeo is a beautiful tricolor Sheltie. He is mostly black with white and a bit of brown. Caring for him is easy because I simply have to make sure he has fresh water and food every day. I exercise him by throwing his toys. Romeo is a good pet because he is nice looking and doesn't require much care.
  Romeo is lots of fun to play with. He loves to play catch. He follows me around the house with a toy and drops it on my foot so that I will kick it. He can catch just about anything, but his favorite is chasing a Frisbee. I really have fun playing with Romeo.
  Romeo takes care of me. He always follows me when I leave a room. When I sit on the couch, he plops down right beside me. When we are outside in the woods, he always makes sure that I keep up with the rest of the family. He always watches out for me.
  As you can see, Romeo is a great pet. I am proud of him and he doesn't require much care. Playing with him is always enjoyable. He watches over me and keeps me safe. Romeo is absolutely the best pet anyone could even have!

范文参考:Expository Essay

Health and Healing at Your Fingertips

Throw out the bottles and boxes of drugs in your house. A new theory suggests that medicine could be bad for your health, which should at least come as good news to people who cannot afford to buy expensive medicine. However, it is a blow to the medicine industry, and an even bigger blow to our confidence in the progress of science. This new theory argues that healing is at our fingertips: we can be healthy by doing Reiki on a regular basis.

Supporters of medical treatment argue that medicine should be trusted since it is effective and scientifically proven. They say that there is no need for spiritual methods such as Reiki, Yoga, and Tai Chi. These methods waste our time, something which is quite precious in our material world. There is medicine that can kill our pain, x-rays that show us our fractured bones, or MRI that scans our brain for tumors. We must admit that these methods are very effective in the examples that they provide. However, there are some “every day complaints” such as back pains, headaches, and insomnia, which are treated currently with medicine. When you have a headache, you take an Aspirin or Vermidon. When you cannot sleep, you take Xanax without thinking of the side effects of these. When you use these pills for a long period, you become addicted to them; you cannot sleep without them. We pay huge amounts of money and become addicted instead of getting better. How about a safer and more economical way of healing? When doing Reiki to yourself, you do not need anything except your energy, so it is very economical. As for its history, it was discovered in Japan in the early 1900s and its popularity has spread particularly throughout America and Western Europe. In quantum physics, energy is recognized as the fundamental substance of which the universe is composed. Reiki depends on the energy within our bodies. It is a simple and effective way of restoring the energy flow. There are no side effects and it is scientifically explained.

Opponents of alternative healing methods also claim that serious illnesses such as HIV/AIDS and cancer cannot be treated without drugs. They think so because these patients spend the rest of their lives in the hospital taking medicine. How can Reiki make these people healthy again? It is very unfortunate that these patients have to live in the hospital losing their hair because of chemotherapy and losing weight because of the side effects of the medicine they take. Actually, it is a common knowledge that except for when the cancer is diagnosed at an early stage, drugs also cannot treat AIDS or cancer. Most of the medicine these patients use are to ease their pain and their sufferings because of the medical treatment they undergo. Instead of drugs which are expensive and have many side effects, you can use your energy to overcome the hardships of life, find an emotional balance, leave the stress of everyday life, and let go of the everyday worries. Most of the chronic conditions such as eczema or migraine are known to have causes such as poor diet and stress. Deep-rooted anger or other strong emotions can contribute to viral infections as well. Since balancing our emotions and controlling our thoughts are very important for our well-being, we should definitely start learning Reiki and avoid illnesses before it is too late.

Some people may still maintain that in our material world, everything depends on time. It is even “lacking time” that causes much of the stress that leads to the illnesses we mentioned. How would it be possible to find time to do Reiki to ourselves and find the people around us when we cannot even find time to go to the theater? This is one good thing about Reiki; it does not require more than 15 minutes of our time. There is no need for changing clothes or special equipment. It is a wonderfully simple healing art, an effective method of relaxation and stress-relief. Most important of all, it is less time consuming than medicine if we think of all the time we spend taking medicine for some complaints and taking some more for the side effects as well.

Having said these, resistance to Reiki would be quite illogical. Reiki is natural and drug-free. What is more, it is easy to learn by anyone, regardless of age and experience. It can be used anywhere, anytime. It also enhances physical, mental, emotional and spiritual well-being, and the benefits last a lifetime. It is definitely high time to get away from the drug boxes we store in our drug cabinet!

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