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essay代写修改:如何用【过去完成时】来写?

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过去完成时 (偶而用)

1. 为了强调两件事出现的时间差。

I was watching TV when suddenly the ground began to shake. My heart beat fast because I was scared. The shake did not stop as I had wished, so I decided to leave the building. I jumped off the couch, took my cell phone, and rushed out of the apartment and ran down the stairs as fast as I could. By the time (When) I reached the ground floor, the quake had stopped.

(“had wished”也可以用简单过去式,因为,它和stop必没有明显的时间差。相较下,”had stopped”这动作就明显比’reach’还要早发生。)

2. 叙述过去一件事时,回溯到该件事更早的时间点。

I was watching TV when suddenly the ground began to shake. We had already had a small quake earlier that day. The expert said on TV that we might have another one later that night, so I had been prepared. Still, my heart beat fast because I was scared. The shake did not stop….

 (用时间副词“earlier that day”将故事带回更早时间点,所以,稍早的地震就用”had had”,而心理准备则用”had been prepared”,之后,时间拉回故事发生当下,主要动作也回到简单过去式。)

当然,也可以将第一和第二个句子合成一句,用 ‘when’ 连贯两个事件:

We had already had a small quake earlier in the evening WHEN suddenly the ground began to shake again.

3,练习: 请发挥想像力,按第一句部份提示,以4到5个句子,编些故事情结(可留言回复):

1. Molly and I were having dinner when…

2. I was trying to find out where I was on the map on a busy Tokyo street when…

3. On a crowded MRT carriage, Judy was thinking about how to say to her boyfriend that she loved him no more when…

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