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Essay总是写不好该怎么办?

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1、 读书破万卷,下笔如有神。

首要的一点还是得肚里有货,通过海量的阅读原著英文,培养了语感,丰富了词汇句型的储备,汲取了文中的精华,从而掌握了更多的写作方法和技巧,倾吐于自己的作文之中,言之有序、言之有物,写作能力会大大提高。

2、不积跬步,无以成千里。

写作是一种训练,需要日积月累,要坚持每天写点东西,选个话题就可以写,你看到的,听到,有感而发的,或者是你自己编的故事,什么都可以的,贵在坚持。写好的东西,即使是同一个话题,可以写几次,不同的角度,不同的人物,有时候时间来不及,先打个草稿,然后再慢慢雕琢。有条件的话,找个英文好的笔友 (pen pal),让他/她帮忙提提意见反馈,你会提高更快。

3、掌握一些技巧,比如:

避免重复(Eliminate the repetitive word or phrase)少用陈词滥调 (cliche)写作要多展示(showing),不一定非要说服(convincing)读者要尽量运用生动形象的语言(descriptive)、新鲜有力的语言、不同句型的交叉使用Essay要少用被动语态 (passive voice),多用主动语态(Active voice)很快写出第一版,不断地重写多用日常用语、平易近人的词汇(use simple words)能用短词就不要用长的。

笼统地说,用被动语态其实不是语法错误,但是用得太多会导致essay太长(啰嗦),容易留下疑问,不吸引读者。

先举几个栗子Passive: 

The door was left open. (As reader, we are left wondering who left the door open)Active: Bob left the door open. (As reader, we know that Bob is the one who performed this action)Passive: The soccer ball was kicked into the goal by Ronaldo. (Ronaldo is the one who did the kicking, but he isn't in the subject position in the sentence)Active: Ronaldo kicked the soccer ball into the goal. Or we can simply say "Ronaldo scored" (note that the active form of the sentence is shorter and more engaging)

在上面这个例子里,作者在叙述一场重要的比赛里面一个十分生动的时刻,如果用了被动语态,情节就拖沓了,又长又像白开水。用主动语态可以这么写As the opposing team approached the goal, Ronaldo kicked the ball towards the upper right corner, VIVA! He scored another goal! 是否比较简洁生动,抓住读者的心。

但是这也不是绝对的,有时候如果你需要描述的着重点是宾语,那么用被动语态就很合适了。比如说在一场火灾中一间百年的房屋被烧了,突出的重点是150年的房屋而不是火灾,那么用被动语态就更合适。

能用短词就不要用长的

  1. 用一个单词代替一组意义相同的单词,例如:a. do not remember => forgetb. do not pay attention to => ignorec. at this point in time => nowd. due to the fact that => because

  2. 省略同义词,例如:The project is important and significant => The project is significant.

  3. 用更简洁的表达:The cover of the book => The book cover

把上面三种帮扶结合起来,讲一个冗长、拗口的句子改写成简短、易懂的句子:

University malls must be accessible and free from congestion in order that students, faculty and employees may have unobstructed passage through the areas of the campus.=>University malls must be free from congestion to allow people to walk through easily.

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