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英文【简历CV代写】修改:别让英语坏了你的跳槽机会!

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打算年后换工作的朋友,不妨利用此时准备一份英文履历,或更新之前的版本,尤其是你已经看到中意的征人启事。

英文履历写法很多,但就像简历CV求职信,你可以从网络上找到许多模板,直接下载,调整部份内容就完成了。但这些模板的用字、措词差异颇大,如何挑选适合自己的模板很多时候取决于你的专长、经验和想应征的职位。

另外,英文履历的目的是凸显你的技能与专长,要做到这一点,在你所挑选的模板,不仅只是条列重要的执掌、责任,而是将「工作内容」转换成「工作表现」。因为,用人主管阅读你的履历只有一个目的:你会给公司什么「好处」,而这个好处是建立在你的工作表现

陈述职务的写法

下面是一位工作三年业务代表的经历,假设这是个网络模板,而且也接近你的情况,让我示范如何将这些职务描述改成强调工作表现的写法:

SAN ANTONIO COMMUNICATION,beijing 2008–Present

Sales Representatives,Sales Department

  • Prospecting for sales leads through directories,magazines,newspapers,and all other business related publications.

  • Coordinating and implementing direct mail promotional campaigns and telemarketing sales activities.

  • Conducting formal and informal presentations of the company’s products and services to potential clients.

  • Developing effective sales and referral networks through participation in business association and organizations.

  • Continuously obtaining feedback from present clients in order to understand any product problem and to obtain valuable market information.

问题点

  1. 英文「经历」栏的写法正是「动词+受词」。然而,这部分的动作如果是现在还在进行(尤其是你还在任职中),则动词用「简单现在式」;若是无重复性的项目或活动,则动词时态改成「简单过去式」(包括你之前的工作)。

  2. 5点职掌中,包含3个能力:‘Coordinating…’‘Conducting…’‘Developing…’,其他两点,似乎业务份内的职责,看不出真正的技能所在。

强调工作表现的写法

调整后的内容如下面,划线部份强调技能和专长:

San Antonio Communications,beijing 2008–present

Sales Representative

  • Identify and analyze sales leads through printed materials and websites to increase sales volumes

  • Coordinated and implemented direct mail campaigns and telemarketing activities to improve the product awareness of the target market

  • Make product presentations and demonstrations to potential customers to develop new business

  • Maintain trusting relationships with clients by analyzing customers’needs and feedback,and consulting with staff engineers for better solutions

  • Negotiated terms of sale and services with customers

  • Develop effective sales and referral networks through participation in business association and organizations

你担心自己没有太多的贡献吗?仔细想,不也是因为你的付出、参与或经验,什么事情得已顺利完成,哪些人受惠了,某些情况获得改善。这些都是你的功劳,把它和其他值得表彰的工作事迹,用上面的方式写下来,会比单纯描述你的职责更吸引用人主管的目光,这不就是你要的吗?

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