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英语【论文代写】机构:如何有效提升英文写作能力?

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写英文作文的时候,如果能够有效进行最后检查,其实能够让整体的英文作文品质更加提升,但是重点是,应该要检查哪些地方呢?写作的文法、标点符号、还是英文单字呢?接续上一次的练习,使用例句的练习方法其实就是在试着英文写作的最后一步:检查的技巧。

一、错误的代名词使用(Incorrect Pronoun Case):

很常遇到的情况就是代名词到底是要用主词还是受词、还是所有词?这在写作比较容易避免,但其实也很常发生在口说的问题中,所以就从现在开始注意这些小细节吧!

原始版本:

Castroʼs communist principles inevitably led to an ideological conflict between he and President Kennedy.

修正版本:

Castroʼs communist principles inevitably led to an ideological conflict between him and President Kennedy.

原始版本:

Because strict constructionists recommend fidelity to the Constitution as written, no one objects more than them to judicial reinterpretation.

修正版本:

Because strict constructionists recommend fidelity to the Constitution as written, no one objects more than they  to judicial reinterpretation.

二、忘记逗点(Omitted Commas):

逗点除了可以用来区分语意、句子之间的关系外,最大的用途还是让读者能够喘口气,但这真的非常需要经验跟大量阅读来磨练啰!

原始版本:

When it comes to eating people differ in their tastes.

修正版本:

When it comes to eating , people differ in their tastes.

原始版本: 

The Huns who were Mongolian invaded Gaul in 451.

修正版本: 

The Huns , who were Mongolian , invaded Gaul in 451. [“Who were Mongolian”虽然有提供说明,但是并不影响整句的语意,属于非限定子句,所以要用逗点隔开喔!]

三、太多逗点(Superfluous Commas):

想到什么就先逗点一下吗?其实这样会让读者非常不好阅读,要小心自己用了太多不必要的逗点。

原始版本:

Field trips are required, in several courses, such as, botany and geology.

修正版本:

Field trips are required in several courses, such as botany and geology.

原始版本:

The term “scientific illiteracy,” has become almost a cliché in educational circles.

修正版本:

The term “scientific illiteracy” has become almost a cliché in educational circles.

四、错用标点符号(Comma Splice):

如果是两个独立意思的句子,除非加上有转折、连续意思的连接词,否则不要单独用逗点连结,可以选择改用句点、分号,或者是重写句子来让结构更精确。

原始版本:

In 1952 Japanʼs gross national product was one third that of France, by the late 1970s it was larger than the GNPs of France and Britain combined.

修正版本: 

In 1952 Japanʼs gross national product was one third that of France . By the late 1970s it was larger than the GNPs of France and Britain combined.

原始版本:

Diseased coronary arteries are often surgically bypassed, however half of bypass grafts fail within ten years.

修正版本:

Diseased coronary arteries are often surgically bypassed ; however , half of bypass grafts fail within ten years.

五、错用省略用字(Apostrophe Errors):

有时候用所有词跟动词实在很容易让人搞混,要记得区分清楚什么时候用所有词(His)什么时候是用动词(He's),还有复数用法也要小心。

原始版本:

In the current conflict its uncertain whoʼs borders their contesting.

修正版本:

In the current conflict it is [itʼs] uncertain whose borders they are [theyʼre] contesting.

原始版本:

The Aztecs ritualʼs of renewal increased in frequency over the course of time.

修正版本: 

The Aztecsʼ ritual s of renewal increased in frequency over the course of time.

六、使用易混淆字(Words Easily Confused):

例如Effect(效果;名词)Affect(影响;动词),还有Lead/Led以及accept/except等等,这些一旦用错整个意思就会差到十万八千里远啰,这就要靠平常单字量的累积来避免了!

原始版本:

The recession had a negative affect on sales.

修正版本:

The recession had a negative effect on sales. (or) The recession affected sales negatively.

原始版本:

The laboratory instructor choose not to offer detailed advise.

修正版本:

The laboratory instructor chose not to offer detailed advice .

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